PEER ASSESSMENT ACTIVITY

... And he saw hanging from the boards of the bridge. While he was falling, clung to a tree branch. At the moment he saw a girl with a rope. And then she said. " I heard a dog barking furiously. I was curious. Wait! Now, pull the rope! After that he got away. That is why he thanked her. And he inveted her to dinner. She said "I must go." He said " Why? I wanted to eat something with you." She said quickly " I must go but my phone number is ... " He thought this girl has been beatiful, clever, pretty, helpful and for me. After that he called her. He said " We couldn't meet with you. That is why: Can you meet me at 2 o'clock at the same place." She said " All right. At 2 o'clock at the same place. Bye bye. " It was 2 o'clock and they meet. After that they have fallen in love. Everything was going so well Hugh had accidents and there was the dog too. The dog died at this accident.

AN ECCENTRIC PERSON

SIMEON ELLERTON(1702-1799)   

Siemon Ellerton lived in the 18th century. He was a fitness fanatic. He was hired as a courier because he liked to walk long distances. On his many often journeys , he would gather up stones from the roadside and carry them on his had. His goal has to build his own house  made of stones. He had enough stones and then he made a little house like cottage. When he couldn't carry any extra weight, he felt uncomfortable. So he walked around with a bag of stones on his head. 

My bibliography:

listverse.com

DESCRIPTION OF A PHOTO

 There is a street in the photo. There are a lot of people. The left side of the photo Adam and Suzanne. They are swimming. On the bench in front of them there is a girl sitting and playing the guitar. Her name is Adele. There's a boy standing opposite Adela. His name is Dimitri. Probably Will is throwing his garbage into the trash. Kevin is skateboarding. A woman is walking with her dog.  In the background of the photo there is a guy sitting on the bench and singing. His name is John. Clara is walking with a briefcase in her hand. Ann is riding a bike. Sarah is looking out of the window. Mr.Cardosa and Ms.Kean are sitting in the train. Paul is selking the Newspapers. A woman with a baby carriage is crossing the street. Maybe a woman is holding her child.

Paragraph Writing

SMOKING 

Smoking is very  harmful. Despite many people continues to smoke. The reason for it looks to cool. This is a wrong idea. Despite this point people don't care. Smoking damages lungs. Smoking ; larynx , mouth , tongue , stomach , finger eleven , small intestine and large intestine and large intestine ... etc 

is mostly the underlying reasons. Smoking robs you of some of your good cholesterol , temporarily raises your blood pressure , increases the blood's clotting likelihood , makes it more difficult to exercise.

Why do we keep doing this? So why is still being sold? It's not a good idea to trade people for the sake of their health. At the end there is death. Every Cigarette you smoke takes away 14 minutes of your life. Think... Don't smoke. 

The benefits start as soon as you stop.

How to paraphrase a text

CHARLIE CHAPLIN
He was born in London , England . His birthday was on 16th April 1889. His family were music hall entertainers. They never divorced but were estrangers in 1891. He lived with his brother and mother in London. His Mother earned money from occasional nursing and dressmaking . They didn't have  financial support from his father. Because of this , him sent to Lambeth Workhouse when he was 7. The workhouse sent him at a school for pawpers.

Dad Charles sr. a singer. He alone invade several days, searching food. Her sister died in 1928. He legitimate 12 stage show " Sherlock Holmes. " In November 1913 he decided to be an actor. He earned 150$ salary in 1913. In 1915 he made 12 comedies. At the age of 26 he was one of the highest paid people. He moved to Switzerland in 1953.

Mildred Harris was his first wife. They married between 1918-1920. First child lived only three days. Lista Grey was his second wife. They have got two children ; Charles jr. and Sydney Earl. Paulette Goddard was his third wife. They married between 1936-1942. Oara O'Neill was his fourth wife. They married in 1943. They have got 8 children. Their home in Switzerland. Oana was 18 years old. Charlie was 53 years old.

He appeared as "Billy" He started a career as a comedien. He joined Keyston Film Company. His salary was 150$ in a week.

He didn't win an Oscar in Best Actor category. He was nominated 1 time for " Best Actor"

He died in 1977 in Switzerland.


My Bibliography:
www.charliechaplin.com
www.britannica.com
www.history-co.uk
www.imdb.com
www.wikipedia.com

RECIPE

CHOCOLATE PIE

INGREDIENTS:

3 eggs 

a glas of sugar

a packet of vanilla sugar

a glas of milk

a half glas of oil

3 glasses of flour

a packet of baking powder

3 table spoon of cacao

HOW TO MAKE IT:

First wisk egg and sugar.

Add milk, oil, baking powder, flour, cacao one by one and mix them.

Greas cake pan.

Pour light mortar flour.

Low heat for 40 Minutes the top to the bottom.

Melt dark chocolate and pour it over the cake.

Put at a fridge.

Wait an hour and then serve it.

FORMAL LETTER 2

Istanbul /Erenköy

8th .Nov.2016

Göztepe/Istanbul

Dear Kılıçoğlu,

Thanks for the information. It is our fault. We handle this. We can give your money back or give a new phone in 2 month if you want.

Your sincerely

SLEEPING BEAUTY

A long time ago there were a king and a queen. They were sad because they were childless. But one day the Quenn met to a frog. A frog crept out of the water on to the land and said to her " Your wish will come true, before a year has gone by, you shall have a daughter." What the frog had said came true and a lovely, a pretty baby princess was born. The which makes a magic cursed her and if her prince doesn't kiss the princess, the princess will sleep forever. All creatures in the Palace with the Princess to sleep. The which couldn't get to the Palace so the Prince put a barbed fence. The fences every year and rises. It was impossible to overcome this limit, but the Prince kissed the princess, named Briar Rose who managed to do so and everyone lived happily ever after.

FORMAL LETTER

                                                                                                                                 TANZİMAT SK. KUNTER APT.
GÖZTEPE/İSTANBUL

3rd November , 2016

Erenköy KVK

To whom it may concern,
I am writing to ask for information about your service. I went to the KVK service 2 days ago. My phone closed , the screen was turning and suddenly my phone's battery ran out. I thought it was the battery. To replace the battery , I opened the front of the phone but you said you couldn't get it back. The warranty of the phone is not valid now. I paid 1355TL to change the phone. This is a money trap. I would like you to give a full refund and my new phone. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faitfully
Bade Naz Kılıçoğlu

A Family Memory

My Mom  studied in Samsun . When she came to Samsun , there were younger men . She didn't want any of them. She was angry at my Grandparents. My Grandparents arranged her marriage . She liked my Dad . Then my Mom and My Dad married.

Letter writing

Hi Caner ,
How are you doing ? I'm fine ,  thanks . Hey , there is a new movie of Leonardo di Caprio in the cinemas . I'm going with my friend , Mert . Would you like to come ? Please call me .
Cem

Hi Cem ,
Thanks for your invitation . I'd like to come but I can't because i visit my Granddad . Another time maybe . Thanks .
Caner

My home and my favourite room

I live in a flat . Our flat has got two bathrooms , a dining room , a hall , a wide kitchen , three bedrooms . My favourite room is my room . Because it makes me relaxed . It has got modern furniture. It has got two bookshelves , a library , a desk , a chair , a wardrobe and a bed . I like my home and my room because it is modern .

My fridge

There is a piece of cheese , some meat , a bunch of grapes , a jar of mustard  in the fridge. There are 3 oranges , 5 bananas , 15 potatoes , 2 loaves of bread , 3 cans of Coke , 3 bottles of water , 2 bottles milk , 2 bars of chocolate , 3 packets of salt , 10 eggs , 2 jars of honey , 2 pieces of butter , 4 apples , 20 tomatoes in the fridge .

My letter

Hi Lisa ,

How are you ? I'm fine . Sydney is great and i love the lifestyle . Sydney is the most important city in Australia but it's different than others city and it's very fun . I staying at my friend's house . My friend's name is Laurel . Her house has got a swimming pool and it's near the shopping center . I usually go shopping and swimming . I go to a public language school . It's a big school but Australian people are so friendly . I like the school but it's hard work . I've got eight lessons every day . In the afternoon , i play basketball . When i get home , i do my homework . I have three hours  of homework . Then i chat with my friends online .

Write soon

Bade

Routine day

On weekdays i always get up at twenty past six . Then i wash my face . I have my breakfast . I go to school by school bus . I listen to my teachers . I do my homework . I play with my sister . I watch TV with my parents . Then i sleep . At the weekends i usually get up 9 o'clock . I have my breakfast with my parents and my sister . On Saturdays i always do my homework and relax at home . On Sundays i sometimes go out with my family and we go shopping . I always listen to music and i often chat with my friends online . I always use the internet . I don't play computer games . I sometimes read a book . In the evening i watch TV with my parents and i play with my sister . I always visit to my grandparents .