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... And he saw hanging from the boards of the bridge. While he was falling, clung to a tree branch. At the moment he saw a girl with a rope. And then she said. " I heard a dog barking furiously. I was curious. Wait! Now, pull the rope! After that he got away. That is why he thanked her. And he inveted her to dinner. She said "I must go." He said " Why? I wanted to eat something with you." She said quickly " I must go but my phone number is ... " He thought this girl has been beatiful, clever, pretty, helpful and for me. After that he called her. He said " We couldn't meet with you. That is why: Can you meet me at 2 o'clock at the same place." She said " All right. At 2 o'clock at the same place. Bye bye. " It was 2 o'clock and they meet. After that they have fallen in love. Everything was going so well Hugh had accidents and there was the dog too. The dog died at this accident.

AN ECCENTRIC PERSON

SIMEON ELLERTON(1702-1799)   

Siemon Ellerton lived in the 18th century. He was a fitness fanatic. He was hired as a courier because he liked to walk long distances. On his many often journeys , he would gather up stones from the roadside and carry them on his had. His goal has to build his own house  made of stones. He had enough stones and then he made a little house like cottage. When he couldn't carry any extra weight, he felt uncomfortable. So he walked around with a bag of stones on his head. 

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DESCRIPTION OF A PHOTO

 There is a street in the photo. There are a lot of people. The left side of the photo Adam and Suzanne. They are swimming. On the bench in front of them there is a girl sitting and playing the guitar. Her name is Adele. There's a boy standing opposite Adela. His name is Dimitri. Probably Will is throwing his garbage into the trash. Kevin is skateboarding. A woman is walking with her dog.  In the background of the photo there is a guy sitting on the bench and singing. His name is John. Clara is walking with a briefcase in her hand. Ann is riding a bike. Sarah is looking out of the window. Mr.Cardosa and Ms.Kean are sitting in the train. Paul is selking the Newspapers. A woman with a baby carriage is crossing the street. Maybe a woman is holding her child.

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SMOKING 

Smoking is very  harmful. Despite many people continues to smoke. The reason for it looks to cool. This is a wrong idea. Despite this point people don't care. Smoking damages lungs. Smoking ; larynx , mouth , tongue , stomach , finger eleven , small intestine and large intestine and large intestine ... etc 

is mostly the underlying reasons. Smoking robs you of some of your good cholesterol , temporarily raises your blood pressure , increases the blood's clotting likelihood , makes it more difficult to exercise.

Why do we keep doing this? So why is still being sold? It's not a good idea to trade people for the sake of their health. At the end there is death. Every Cigarette you smoke takes away 14 minutes of your life. Think... Don't smoke. 

The benefits start as soon as you stop.

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CHARLIE CHAPLIN
He was born in London , England . His birthday was on 16th April 1889. His family were music hall entertainers. They never divorced but were estrangers in 1891. He lived with his brother and mother in London. His Mother earned money from occasional nursing and dressmaking . They didn't have  financial support from his father. Because of this , him sent to Lambeth Workhouse when he was 7. The workhouse sent him at a school for pawpers.

Dad Charles sr. a singer. He alone invade several days, searching food. Her sister died in 1928. He legitimate 12 stage show " Sherlock Holmes. " In November 1913 he decided to be an actor. He earned 150$ salary in 1913. In 1915 he made 12 comedies. At the age of 26 he was one of the highest paid people. He moved to Switzerland in 1953.

Mildred Harris was his first wife. They married between 1918-1920. First child lived only three days. Lista Grey was his second wife. They have got two children ; Charles jr. and Sydney Earl. Paulette Goddard was his third wife. They married between 1936-1942. Oara O'Neill was his fourth wife. They married in 1943. They have got 8 children. Their home in Switzerland. Oana was 18 years old. Charlie was 53 years old.

He appeared as "Billy" He started a career as a comedien. He joined Keyston Film Company. His salary was 150$ in a week.

He didn't win an Oscar in Best Actor category. He was nominated 1 time for " Best Actor"

He died in 1977 in Switzerland.


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